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@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ Her: No. It´s fine. You can sit down in the front as well. Just there will be f
Her: I need some space to perform. Just keep a little bit of a distance.
++++ [Sit down across the aisle] You just sit down in the first seat across the aisle from her. -> f4r4.the_show
++++ [Take a seat two places away from her]
You shimmy into the aisle where she is and sit down with a double seat of space to her. A side glance in her direction subjects ruffely knit fabrics and jangling bracelets.
You shimmy into the aisle where she is and sit down with a double seat of space to her. A side glance in her direction subjects ruffled knit fabrics and jangling bracelets.
-> f4r4.the_show
++++ [Sit down in the back row]
You´d actually prefer to sit in the back row. So you go and take your seat, your back against the wall, with the whole theatre in view.
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ Her: No. It´s fine. You can sit down in the front as well. Just there will be f
You can just make out a hand with long, pink acrylic nails and glittering rings gesturing to a place two seats away from her.
You shimmy into the aisle and take the seat. A side glance in her direction subjects ruffely knit fabrics and jangling bracelets.
You shimmy into the aisle and take the seat. A side glance in her direction subjects ruffled knit fabrics and jangling bracelets.
-> f4r4.the_show
* [Sit down across the aisle from her]
You sit down in the first seat across the aisle from her.
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ Her: No. It´s fine. You can sit down in the front as well. Just there will be f
-> f4r4.the_performer
* (bunny)[Make the shadow figure of a bunny, to run from the wolf]
You position your hands to make the figure of a bunny.
++ It´s ears wiggle nervously. [] The ears of the wolf twitch in turn, with anticipation.
++ Its ears wiggle nervously. [] The ears of the wolf twitch in turn, with anticipation.
++ It rubs its nose with its front paws in an attempt to be too cute to be eaten. [] But there is only a low hungry growl from the back of the theatre.
--
Your bunny decides to make a run for it.
@@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ It scuffs its hoofs, rears up and charges you.
As you get back up again you see the shadow unicorn is already on top of you. Trampling you to death instead.
Her: There serves you right you jumping Jack. Are you trying to steal my scene? You know for a moment there I thought this was kind of fun. Tell me: what are your acting references?
Her: There, serves you right, you jumping Jack. Are you trying to steal my scene? You know for a moment there I thought this was kind of fun. Tell me: what are your acting references?
++++ [Get impaled]
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@@ -560,11 +560,11 @@ It scuffs its hoofs, rears up and charges you.
As you get back up again you see the shadow unicorn is already on top of you. Trampling you to death.
Her: There serves you right you jumping Jack. Are you trying to steal my scene? Tell me: what are your acting references?
Her: There, serves you right, you jumping Jack. Are you trying to steal my scene? Tell me: what are your acting references?
++++ [Get impaled]
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--
You try even harder for your second death scene. Now that you know you have an appreciative scene partner and audience. You cheat to the side of the screen to see the unicorn and its movement. It has got you through the solarplexus and you convulse with the jerks of its head. When it finally pulls its horn up and out, you go with the movement and fall face first to the floor. You just about manage to make it a stage fall and not knock your teeth out on the thin scratchy carpet.
You try even harder for your second death scene. Now that you know you have an appreciative scene partner and audience. You cheat to the side of the screen to see the unicorn and its movement. It has got you through the solar plexus and you convulse with the jerks of its head. When it finally pulls its horn up and out, you go with the movement and fall face first to the floor. You just about manage to make it a stage fall and not knock your teeth out on the thin scratchy carpet.
You stay on the floor until you hear clapping.
@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ When you look up to her face, your eyes adjust enough for you to see. A mess of
Her: Didn't even know they had those here. Sweet. But that's it. You should try some of the local sorts. They pack a little more ZING.
- else:
Her: Hugh. Salty snacks. OK I guess. Sorry, I normally prefer sweets. But I'd still like to try some.
Her: Huh. Salty snacks. OK I guess. Sorry, I normally prefer sweets. But I'd still like to try some.
She tears at the plastic wrapping and tosses a piece up into her hand which folds into a fist briefly. A second later, when her hand resumes the foxface the snack is gone.
@@ -643,7 +643,7 @@ When you look up to her face, your eyes adjust enough for you to see. A mess of
Her: Didn't even know they had those here. Sweet. But that's it. You should try some of the local sorts. They pack a little more ZING.
- else:
Her: Hugh. Salty snacks. OK I guess. I normally prefer sweets. But I guess this is a total emergency situation.
Her: Huh. Salty snacks. OK I guess. I normally prefer sweets. But I guess this is a total emergency situation.
She tears at the plastic wrapping and tosses a piece up into her hand which folds into a fist briefly. A second later, when her hand resumes the foxface the snack is gone.